Saturday, June 16, 2012

Chapter one

Going straight to bed was out of the question. Aubrey was having a fit about his back. It was just two days after he had a play boxing fight with his buddies. Now someone, clearly, had too many jabs and punches towards his back which caused it to hurt in agony. Kitziah, his wife of 2 years, decided that his next offer would be put down because she couldn't stand to see him hurt and complain and have less time to enhance their relationship. Yes, he was a grown man and could take it but she couldn't stand to see him hurting physically.

She looked over to him who was lying on his stomach with his chin at the edge of the mattress. That made her think of a quick solution to help him feel better before going to sleep.

"Baby?" she said, tone full of sense.


"Move over here. Let me rub your back," she said nicely, putting down her magazine.

"No, you're busy. I'm fine."

"You being sarcastic, baby? You know I'm not doing anything important!"

"Oh, okay," he said scooting over.

She lifted up his shirt slowly to tease him. After his shirt was off, he folded his arms on a pillow she gave him. She leaned over to the dresser to grab a bottle of lotion and then put her legs back in between his back.

Squirting some lotion on her hand, she made sure to rub her hands together really well to get that warmth and then gently placed them on his back.

Aubrey hadn't felt this relaxed in days. The stress of work and play left him in a state to turn to his wife for help. But being the person she is, she only liked to tease him and not give him the full effect. In order to calm his nerves and calm his pain, he needed a massage deep of adoration and tenderness.
He shot his head up when she stopped for too long of a time.

"What are you doing?"

"Sorry, I was thinking about something."

The truth that lied within was it was someone and not something.

"Well can you like, come on, you know? The little nice thing I get from you once in a while and you are just stopping? What's going on?"

"Baby, my bad! I'm getting back to it."

An ounce of lotion was poured onto his back. The only thing was, this time was she forgot to rub it in her hands to make it warm. Aubrey said nothing instead emitted a heavy, frustrating sigh.

"Kitz, what are you doing?! What kind of massage is this? You're not making this any better," he said, not telling a pinch of a fib.

His semi-yelling caught her attention and made her massage him how he liked. And although he wasn't quite sure what she was thinking about, he hoped that she snapped out of it soon because he was becoming annoyed.
The massage ended soon and he had felt a little bad. He could have felt better, but he wasn't going to complain anymore. The last thing he wanted to do was hurt her feelings as much as she was hurting his.

"Babe," he said turning on his back, "I'm sorry."

"I know you are and it's okay. I'm just in a quandary about something," she lied sitting on top of him.

"What's on your mind? Do I need to get it off?"

She giggled. "No. I just don't know if a want the black lace up heels with the bow, the silver and black wedged or the brown ones. It's so hard!"

"In all seriousness, are you kidding? Your mind has been on shoes while your baby is hurting?"

"I know love. I'm sorry," she pouted kissing his mouth.

"Are you really?"

"Yes" she whispered in a child-like voice.

"Prove it," he firmly said, crossing his arms.  She slowly moved closer to kiss placing one hand on his shoulder and the other on his lap. Her lips flew to his neck where she bit, sucked and kissed.

"Oh, I thought so," he smirked. "I love you."

"Oh I love you more."

"Impossible babe!"

"Why is that?"

"Because I love you more."

"Whatever you say," she smiled laying flat on him with a wide smile.

On the other side of town, Onika had just come home from a stressed day at the office. Being an editor for Mode Magazine, she never got the break she wanted and needed. The only time she felt at peace was with her husband of 3years, Kenneth and her 2 year old daughter, Heaven.
She opened the front door to her 3 bedroom home, exhausted.
"Baby, I'm home," she yelled, kicking off her sexy black pumps, giving her feet room to breathe.

"Oh, how was your day?" Kenneth said as he walked out the kitchen.

"Stressful and eventful." Onika smirked at the sight of her very handsome, very buff husband in a feminine apron. He walked towards her and kissed her forehead. Onika was a little pissed off, for the past couple of weeks since Kenneth doesn't touch her with affection anymore but because she was always tired from work, she didn't have the energy to bring to up, so she brushed it off... for now. "You cooked dinner?"

"Yep?" Kenneth answered whilst grabbing her hand and leading her into the kitchen.

"Where's Heaven?"

"In the dining room playing with her new toys. Go and take a seat. I will be there shortly," he said quickly as if he needed to rush back into the kitchen.

"Are you sure you don't need help?"

"No, I'm good."

"You sure?"

"For God's sake Onika, I said go and sit down!" Kenneth shouted loudly in her face, causing her to jump. Her heart was beating double its normal pace. She just walked in to the dining room in silence. Kenneth knew he shouldn't have raised his voice at his wife and the mother of his child. He sighed heavily, mad that his frustration landed on her.

"Mommy, you're home!" Heaven exclaimed, happily as her mother walked into the room.

"Hey baby I missed you," Onika smiled kissing her daughter's forehead.

"Missed you.” Heaven cooed. Her mother smiled.

Heaven talked to her mom about her day. For a two year old, she had the mind and words of a five year old. After about five minutes, Kenneth came out with the plates of food. He then sat opposite Onika not knowing that she would get up from the table, leaving her lovely food there.

"Onika!" he called after her. She grabbed her shoes from the front door. He called her name again. She didn't respond until he grabbed her forearm.

"Yes?" She said in a hushed tone.

"Where you going?"

"To bed," she said with frustration.


Onika changed the subject to what was on her mind. "Why did you yell at me? You've never yelled at me before." Onika said with blurry vision; her tears were surfacing.

Kenneth hugged her saying, "I'm sorry, I just have a lot on my mind." Onika pulled away and looked up at him concerned.

Kenneth wasn't lying he did have a lot on his mind, it wasn't so much as to what it was more, who was on his mind. "Don't worry it's nothing for you to worry about" He kissed her forehead. "You still my Barbie?"

"What is Barbie without Ken?"

"I love you," he admitted, hugging her tightly.

"Love you too," she said throwing it off and not acknowledging his embrace.

When dinner was finished, Kenneth cleaned up the table and dishes while Onika went to put her daughter in the tub. Even though she forgave him, she wondered what could possibly be on his mind. Heaven shook her out her thought process when she began heavily swinging both of their arms up the steps. Onika looked down and grinned before approaching the bathroom door.

She opened the door and immediately trailed over to the tub, turning on the water. Heaven stood behind her as she usually did every night when she took a bath. The refreshing, transparent water rose swirling as Onika's hand circulated checking for temperature. By then, she grabbed Heaven's favourite scent of bubble bath and poured it into the water. After pouring the soap, she helped her daughter undress. Heaven splashed into the water after receiving a plane ride from her mother.

A little water sat on the floor after but it wasn't a big deal because there was a towel that laid there.

"So Heaven... what did you and daddy do today?"

"We had lots of fun! I went on the swings and went high up in the air. We went to this..."

"What's wrong?"

"I don't know what it's called," she pouted.

"The zoo?"




"Uh... pet store?"


"Oh, the museum. Did you have fun, baby?"

"Yes mommy. Daddy says I'm a princess."

"That you are," Onika said lightly squeezing her nose. "Let's wash your hair.

Back with Aubrey and Kitziah, sleep ensued. Aubrey became vexed being woken from his slumber. He was hoping that he could just sleep for the rest of the night. After his wife apologizing for her massage issue, another little argument occurred which sent them both to sleep. In the ominous setting, he opened his eyes to a bland wall.
"Aubrey," she whispered with her hand upon his rib cage.


"There's too much space between us and I can't sleep."

"I'm sorry," he said shutting his eyes. She gazed at the back of his head, scrunching up her face as to question who he thought he was.

"Can you move over here a little, please?"

"Fine!" he huffed, scooting back to the front of her body. "Better?!" He was still annoyed from earlier.

"Yes. By the way, I wanted to say sorry again. Do you forgiv-"

He cut her off retorting, "Sure, but I'm tired, okay?"

"I'll stop bothering under one condition."


"Say you're sorry like you mean it and tell me you love me."

A faded smile appeared as he turned to look her in the eyes. "Kitz, maybe if you'd stop bothering me, I wouldn't have anything to be sorry for. You understand what I'm talking about?"

"Okay I get it. I'm the one who should be apologizing," eyes rolling to the back of her head.

"You think?"

She stared at him a while longer. "Sorry," she told him nonchalantly.

"Okay goodnight."

While turning to face the other way and bringing the covers up to her, she replied, "Good night" and continued to think deeply into someone.



  1. I Cant wait To get More into this story.
    Soo it seems that both Aubrey and Nic are having troubles in their Marriage. And their Spouses Have feeling for someone else? But Heaven Is frekin Adorable. Shes Sooo Smart. Just Like Nic. Pleasee posst soon! Good job you Guys! :)

  2. Ooh this actually seems interestin, specially since its Aubrika! Seems both Aubrey & Onika r havin marriage troubles & their partners r actin weird. Aww Heaven is soo cute! I wonder how Aubrey & Nicki interact with each other. Post soon! :)

  3. Dude, Aubrey's wife is annoying -__- like I wanna punch her and it's only the first chapter lol Aubrey seems like he doesn't wanna deal w/ her anymore but *shrug* you put the ring on her finger.

    Kenneth almost made me smack him tho like you do NOT yell at Onika, ever. Lil Heaven is so cute and smart ^_^ what's wrong w/ Kenneth? He cheating or something? Hmmm I'm curious

  4. How about Kitziophrenic or whatever her name is and Ken just get together and let Aubrey and Onika be. Problem solved :D It's not like Heaven is old enough to know who her zaddy is anyway!!!

    1. I agree, but at 2 yeas old she would definitely know if her dad wasn't in the picture.

  5. This first chapter was AMAZING like Nicki Being With Whats his face and married and have a kid. Then drake married to catlady was So I already have thoughts of what is going to happen next like so many thoughts like.!

    Catlady and what's his face is having a affair because of the way the both been acting. So maybe their together or something. But I Didnt Like The Way What's his face yelled at nicki though.! That was so rude.!

    I'm sure drake and nicki is suspecting something but this story is starting out so amazing and interesting you are a great writer :) - Post Soon

  6. soooo nicki husband cheating on her with drake's annoying ass wife..she already getting on my nerves!!
    this story is gonna be good...

  7. So I'ma need for Onika and Aubrey to get together ASAP first off..

    Dat bitch of a wife that aubrey has is annoying and ditzy like the fuck you doing not rubbing my baby back I mean come on its drake dumb ass -___-

    Den Onika lil mean ass bew is disrespectful yelling at he for no apparent reason... Hoe prolly cheating on my baby -___- - milli

  8. Wow. This was only the first chapter and I already know this story is going to be AMAZING. It is so obvious that Drake and his wife are distant and not happy with each other. She clearly is cheating on him, thinking about someone else when you're with your husband...don't sound right! Lol and Drake just sounds so frustrated with her like I think he kinda knows what's going on with her. Smh, why would you wanna cheat on someone as cute as Aubs?! He's perfect. He definitely deserves someone better *cough Onika cough* :p

    Ughhhh Kenneth is freakin annoying. He is so bipolar like he was actin all sweet and shit at first and then he just had that outburst like NO. You don't yell at Nic like that. And awwwww Heaven is so adorable! I really can't wait to see how Nic and DRake meet each other. Or do they know each other already? Ughhh I'm thinking about so many possiblities right lol but POST SOON! Oh and thanks for the link Alliepooh! Two amazing writers = ONE BOMB ASS STORY! Ha, I can't wait for the next chapter forreal <3

  9. can i just say i am already loving the damn story and you guys just posted the 1st chapter...insane anyways i feel like there is a lot of potential for this story i can tell this one is going to be good *makes popcorn grabs skittles and commence waiting stage* lol cant wait till the next chapter please post soon @TeamMinajAwesum

  10. Wow okay so I'm late on commenting but oh well...I'm catching up now.
    Smh..she needs a better excuse than some damn shoes! Her man is in pain & she starts thinking about whoever she's messing around with..just UGH! Kenneth raised his voice like he done lost his mind because he has a lot on his wth is up with these 2? *reads the next chap*